Kia ora, I am a student at Belfast School, Welcome - Haere Mai. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share and Grow.
Tuesday, May 18, 2021
Who am I poem
I had to write about me and what I look and what I like to do in my free time. I did it on a google doc. Then I Ctrl C'd it onto a Google Drawing.
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Well done Monique! You followed the format of the poem really well and I really like the simile you used to describe yourself swimming. It would have been helpful in your description if you had told us that you had to follow the format of another poem that we read together as a class. Keep up the great work and I will wait to see what you post next!
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